Love that ending.

Loved the whole thing! Thanks so much for sharing it with the Café.

Excellent, very entertaining and the ending was great, congratulations to you and your son

I liked the routine, but it seems to me that the subtext is that the son is screwing things up. You might try a subtext where the magic is happening unexpectedly, or even a rivalry, where the two of you disagree on what trick to do --you count three and the son counts four.

Still, great trick, great ending. Like the miser's dream, coming up with a satisfying ending is difficult.

Actually, I think the subtext is that Bill is not screwing up, but in fact is the real magician .

Check out some of their other videos on YouTube (esp. their Linking Rings routine) and I think you'll see that Raven tends to set it up so that Bill is the real magician.

Bill is clearly having a ball! Nicely done Raven.

Perverse linking rings.

http://youtu.be/XI-sqY_XAFw

I greatly appreciate and consider all feedback!

My intention is that I THINK Bill is screwing up but in the end Bill always turns out to be the real magician... And all along the audience knows the truth (?).

Great job! Where can I get one of those "Bill's 3/4 Card Trick" signs?

Loved it! Great job.