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Topic: My first
Message: Posted by: KeokeSilver_Fang (Sep 15, 2009 03:44PM)
Alright so this is my first video post here hope you all enjoy it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OnVN8Q7Kxis

Hope you enjoy.
Message: Posted by: ilmungo (Sep 15, 2009 04:22PM)
Well, the story is nice, but as it has nothing to do with what's happening with the trick, it made me lose track of the effect. I'd say find another way of telling that story...

Luigi
Message: Posted by: Bill (Sep 15, 2009 07:00PM)
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On 2009-09-15 17:22, ilmungo wrote:
Well, the story is nice, but as it has nothing to do with what's happening with the trick, it made me lose track of the effect. I'd say find another way of telling that story...

Luigi
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I agree with Luigi. Nice story, hauntley beautiful music, I'm sure the trick is good, but I found myself watching but trying to match what you were saying with what was happening and then going WHAT????

If that's your story, you show talent for story telling. Just make sure the story is motivated by what going on in the trick.