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Topic: Mother's Day Magic
Message: Posted by: asif (May 17, 2019 11:47AM)
Hi guys,
I made a new video in accordance with the mother's day.It would be great if you guys can look into it and shed some light.


Thanking in advance.
Message: Posted by: Dave Scribner (May 17, 2019 07:47PM)
Nice routine but I would make two observations. First, I felt the music was too loud. If it hadn't been for the closed captioning, I wouldn't have known what you were saying. Secondly, in several places, you snapped your fingers to make the magic happen. I would rather have just seen the routine without that. To me it seemed to detract from the story line. Other than that, very nice.
Message: Posted by: asif (May 18, 2019 11:22PM)
Thank You Dave for the suggestions. Yeah the snapping was a bit too much in this ,haha. Will work on the audio in the next act. I have got comments from some more people regarding my recorded voice.