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ChrisCroydon_02 New user Vienna, Austria 8 Posts |
I am not too much experienced with spoon bending and have come up with a sequence of bents that fit to my text I recite, a poem on a waiter at a Café irritating people and neglecting his job. I would like to know from those who do spüoon bending how they feel about doing a fixed sequence of bents and telling a story that rhymes and is in meter. Does it spoil the effect? Here is a link to my selfrecording on my balcony with wind blowing and red socks oops sort of funny or comic http://www.metacafe.com/watch/3044902/th......e_spoon/ please let me know what you think so I can improve for those who view Many thanks
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ChrisCroydon_02 New user Vienna, Austria 8 Posts |
Hi, just one of my videos I wanted to share from youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8rss1LWDzMI kind of odd. Thanks for time and maybe comment, Cheers Chris
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Ms. Merizing Loyal user Edwin Carl Erwin is digging postholes for 232 Posts |
I appreciate seeing your spoon bending performance & accompanying original verse. The narrative of the spoon bending waiter at Josephine's Café is very clever. The poem vividly evokes an environ where creative artists meet & are served by a waiter no less imaginative in the 'perfomance' of his job.
My only suggestion would be to improve the sound quality. Given that the recording was outside, on a windy day, only small bits of the verse were difficult to hear properly. A studio setting would solve the sound issue. Very nicely done poem & routine. Thanks for posting this.
Pleased to continue finding that all the world's a stage.
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