I am working on some new advertising materials for my new school show and although I feel I have it pretty well covered I got to thinking about catch phrases that will provoke a phone call or direction to my website.

currently I have

Don't miss out on hosting this spectacular and unique school assembly - CALL TODAY

below there are several graphics and several pics laid out along with website and phone number and a little star with "booking 2012/13 NOW"

so I am wondering is there a better tag line or call to action line then this?

curious for your thoughts.

thanks

sam

Avoid disappointment Call NOW!

Give them a reason to take action now as opposed to later?

On the reverse side I have a statement that says call today to save $100

maybe I don't need anything else on the front. by taking it off all together it would help make the front more clean.

Scott this is the card I sent you,

I will send you the new one I made.
let me know what you think

sam

Preferred dates fill fast - Call Today

or

Don't miss out - Call Today

or

Dates will fill fast, DON'T be disappointed!


I think the descriptive line that you are using could be placed elsewhere withon your materials.

Blair

Limited engagements are available ~ Please call today to secure your dates
(or for Please call today for availability <and to apply your XXX discount by April 31st>)

There is no real fear of loss in that statement (which motivates some buyers) but having been in business personally "dates will fill fast" puts me off but that is only because I know what's behind the curtain


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