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NeoMagic
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I didn't notice this thread... my comments are posted here:

http://www.themagiccafe.com/forums/viewt......30&1
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Billy Bo
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My next step is to first of all resize all the pages. the references will go up when I get enough of them. put a contact on the first screen of the adult stuff. then I'm going to scan on my newspaper artical which I think will give me a bit more credibility. just so you know the other links are there foe a reason. the juggler is my father in law who also does magic and the other kids magician is my mentor and friend who chucks me work here there and everywhere. so it would be rude not to link them. they will link me when they update their websites next
BlackShadow
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Fonts are far too big. Buttons too big. Some links didn't work. All navigation not shown on the home page. Navigation should all display when page loads without scrolling and be consistent on each page. Some text jumbled (display didn't work well in FireFox). For a more professional looking site you would be better off going for less bold shades. Pastel shades work easier on the eye.

Other than that, good effort, but I'm sure you want a great effort to attract maximum business. Actually, I'm not sure how much business can be generated from a website unless it is superbly linked and search engine friendly, but having got people there, every little helps!
DerZauberer
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The buttons and navigation is way to big - you really need to modify that.

One thing I noticed in your Bio "About Me" --- In the beginning you are in the first person, "I" then in the second portion, you in the third person "He"

Good effort - it just needs tweeking. Great photo examples.
Eduardo
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If you need a flash site please tell me... Smile
http://www.simples.tk
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