Hi
this is my new promo video
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JzHTNG03B5w

comment please

I liked the beginning, the end needs to be redone..... handing out pee shooters doesn't work.
Maybe a bit shorter..... cut the parasol box w/ the slow music..... maybe just a couple quick shots of you putting in the umbrellas and then him coming out. Shorter overall. Very good.

Plus..... I couldn't understand you ..... it was like you were speaking a different language. Bravo. Tom

Manic

The beginning is way too fast. The middle slows down to much. Slow down the beginning andf speed up the middle, so that it maintains a constant pace throughout.

I agree, speed up the middle... And for your own safety, please think about replacing the one trick...

These links might help to convince you:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TGt1mmY94NI

http://www.themagiccafe.com/forums/viewt......forum=36


Lyndel

Great stuff.
The fact that you were performing the effects in such professional surroundings can't fail to impress.

The thing that really caught my eye was the umbrella's thru cardboard box. The filming/presentation seemed deadly serious but the effect is flippant. I think you need to choose what you are going for: comedy or magic not just a hazy place between the two. The rest was great, though.
Good luck.
George