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andrelimantara Special user Surabaya, Indonesia 871 Posts |
Hi, Guys
It's been a long time since I posted a video. This is one of my creation http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MAVb8iEUpxA Comments are welcome Enjoy Andre
"Good performance comes from good practice, Great performance comes from the heart - Andre Limantara"
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Sal Amangka Special user Manila, Philippines 712 Posts |
That's a very wonderful matrix routine! The storyline is just perfect! Bravo!
Sal |
rannie Inner circle 4375 Posts |
Andre,
Well done. Once the patter get solid.... this could be a show piece. It is very refreshing to see a matrix with an actual story line. There are a few moments where there were some lull. I mean, the hand were in a suspicious position for a long time while you were doing your patter. Perhaps a video with your face could help your misdirection. I think it is a solid routine in the making. Best to you Andre! Rannie
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andrelimantara Special user Surabaya, Indonesia 871 Posts |
@Sal
Thanks for your comment, Sal. @Rannie Thanks, Rannie for your comment. Appreciate it. I will do it with my face... I mean with my face shown in the clip CHeers Andre
"Good performance comes from good practice, Great performance comes from the heart - Andre Limantara"
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Mb217 Inner circle 9520 Posts |
I thought this was wonderful Andre. Your work has definitely gotten better and better. It's a good story but perhaps a bit long. You might work on streamlining it a bit to make it sharper as to the moves. And I liked the moves as well but some were suspicious and drew my eye off the story you were telling. But I think a laymen would simply enjoy the magic as you present it. Keep up the great work my friend...it's showing in a big way.
And of course The Boss here gives you some great guidance on how to make the overall effect stronger...Listen well. -Mb
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Logan Inner circle 2289 Posts |
I agree with all the comments above Andre, you got a good routine there. All that's left is the icing on the cake, which is the patter. I mean, you got your basic story down, just refine it and go over it several times whilst doing the trick to time the sequences correctly and you'll get a great routine that will not only amaze, but make a point as well!
I was highly entertained by it and was even fooled by your smooth sleight of hand! Good job brother! Take care, Logan
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