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sleight king Loyal user 278 Posts |
I would really like people's opinion about my new site. Many thanks
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Barry Donovan Special user 848 Posts |
I like it
maybe some pictures or videos in addition to what you have also why is it called monster creations? why not alexmicheal.co.uk ?
when you have eliminated the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth
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daviaac Veteran user 351 Posts |
I agree with purist videos are good I did think after scrolling through each section that the beginning started in much the same way maybe have that txt appear on every page seperately i.e. willing to travel.
just an idea it's fine without it though... nice website luke
- the secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources
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Eddie Torres Special user New York City 692 Posts |
I think it's a wonderful looking site. It says what it needs to. I would probably put the wedding, corporate and private parties sections together as they basically say the same thing.
I disagree with the others about the video. Video can be nice but it can also work against you. The point of the site is to get people interested enough to call you so you can sell them your show and your pictures do just that. I wish I had some decent pictures of me performing... Eddie
Eddie Ivan Torres
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professorwhut Inner circle Posts R US sold me 1353 Posts |
Nice and clean, I like it.
The monster name does imply some other theme however.
After much soul searching about a signature, I decided not to have one.
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sleight king Loyal user 278 Posts |
Thanks for all the advice. the monster bit is the company who is designing it before I launch it over my old rubbish site.
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Christopher Lyle Inner circle Dallas, Texas 5698 Posts |
Sleight...
I enjoyed the website. No garbage. Very streamlined and corporate. I would hire you after seeing your website b/c it appears very professional. Not gaudy and hokey like many other Magi sites I've come across. One thing...I'm running lightening fast internet here and your page did take quite a bit of time to load...so you may wish to have your webguy look into why it takes some time to load. GREAT SITE! Congrats...
In Mystery,
Christopher Lyle Magician, Comic, Daredevil, and Balloon Twisting Genius For a Good Time...CLICK HERE! |
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kinesis Inner circle Scotland, surrounded by 2708 Posts |
Nice site, it loads very quickly (for me). I had to laugh, you have a contact form on EVERY page EXCEPT the 'Contact' page ????
Derek |
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Daryl -the other brother Special user Chicago 594 Posts |
The site loaded quickly for me also.
Nice site Alex, just one question about corporate shows. Have you really traveled around the world doing shows for some of the world's largest companies? That's a big statement and you may be asked for a list of previous client's. So don't say it if it isn't true. |
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cougar New user 30 Posts |
Just a something I noticed: are the tag words supposed to be visible on the bottom of the first page?
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Christopher Lyle Inner circle Dallas, Texas 5698 Posts |
I rebooted to clear out my virtual memory and it seems to load up ok now. Sorry bout' that...the issue was on my end.
In Mystery,
Christopher Lyle Magician, Comic, Daredevil, and Balloon Twisting Genius For a Good Time...CLICK HERE! |
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gaddy Inner circle Agent of Chaos 3526 Posts |
How do you do that bi-location trick on your splash page? Awesome!
Just kidding. The page looks great. Clean, easy to read and navigate, contact info on the 1st page. All around good design!
*due to the editorial policies here, words on this site attributed to me cannot necessarily be held to be my own.*
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Bill Palmer Eternal Order Only Jonathan Townsend has more than 24312 Posts |
The only phrase that might be confusing is "Multiple Award Winning Close up Nottingham Magician." Did you win the "Multiple Award"?
"An award-winning magician, specialising in close-up magic." would say the same thing without looking pretentious. You could add in a separate sentence that you are based in Nottingham.
"The Swatter"
Founder of CODBAMMC My Chickasaw name is "Throws Money at Cups." www.cupsandballsmuseum.com |
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Skotster Regular user Belle Vernon, Pennsylvania 109 Posts |
I get a 404 not found error
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Bad to the Balloon Inner circle Clearwater Florida 2116 Posts |
Quote:
On 2008-11-25 21:29, Skotster wrote: Me too!!! Doesn't load for safari browser...
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Skotster Regular user Belle Vernon, Pennsylvania 109 Posts |
I'm using Firefox if that makes any difference in the loading of the page.
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sleight king Loyal user 278 Posts |
Its gome live now so its at http://www.alexmagic.co.uk
Thanks for your help everyone. I will endevour to change it |
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Bill Palmer Eternal Order Only Jonathan Townsend has more than 24312 Posts |
The thing to do is to think about how the page looks to a layman. How will a person who knows NOTHING about magic interpret what you have put up on your site.
Another hint -- for fast loading keep your index page very simple -- no more than one photo, and it should not be more than about 25K or 30K.
"The Swatter"
Founder of CODBAMMC My Chickasaw name is "Throws Money at Cups." www.cupsandballsmuseum.com |
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Hansel Inner circle Puerto Rico 2492 Posts |
Great web page! Congratulations!
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jcroop Special user 771 Posts |
I also think that the tags are not supposed to be on the page. Otherwise it does look very professional.
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