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scaevola Loyal user 251 Posts |
I just got my new website up and running, please PM me with any feedback!
http://www.burkegiordano.com |
ClintonMagus Inner circle Southwestern Southeast 3997 Posts |
I think the link you provided should go to the "Home" page, and it should immediately show a photo of you, along with a short description of what you do. Put the videos, etc., on another page.
Also, if you aren't comfortable writing "copy", work with someone who is. I think your basic premise for your invisible mouse "assistant" is good, but it needs to be much more visible upon entering your site.
Things are more like they are today than they've ever been before...
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scaevola Loyal user 251 Posts |
Thanks for the feedback. I am definately going to get some help with the copy on my site. I need to have as much info as possible on here.
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AaronTheMagician Loyal user 291 Posts |
I like the fact that it's white and not jet black with a ton of red. (I'm one to talk! lol) But it's a nice change.
Would like to see some nicer photography that tells more about you than snapshots that look myspace-ready. One thing a non-magician friend ranted about once, concerning myspace... "I hate it when there are series of pictures, nay entire albums, of the same lighting and angle -- just different facial expressions. I don't think anyone wants to see that many ways you can take the same pic with your new BlackBerry." Just some thoughts. Sit on them. ^_^ |
scaevola Loyal user 251 Posts |
Thanks for the advice. I am strongly considering hiring a professional photographer so I can get some quality shots. I am also going to be adding some more interactive content soon.
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corsufle Loyal user 202 Posts |
Your "About Burke" page is showing some html where it is inteded to show your photo. Otherwise, I like the look, find it easy enough to navigate and especially like that it is a very readable black on white. Good luck!
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scaevola Loyal user 251 Posts |
Thanks for the advice. I put some more color on the site.
See for yourself! http://www.burkegiordano.com |
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