Hello! I have been lurking the forums for awhile to get advice and whatnot for my magic but I have been working on a color change and I just can't seem to get the change to look like the creators! I think Tony Chang as well as many skilled magicians are on this forum so I decided to make my first post asking for advice haha. Could I get some insight on aesthetics of the change please? Constructive criticism is more then welcome because that's how one improves!

Thanks!

http://www.vimeo.com/7871226

Password: Luminaire

Your use of the clipshift,without the annoying wriggling,made it angly for a start!
Looking at a change from any angle but the front,always puts me off,sorry.
Apart from that,I thought everything was very good!
Ray.

Thanks for the advice Ray! Sorry to ask, but I changed it to fit what ya said, is this a little better?

http://www.vimeo.com/7884944

Password: Luminaire

Take my advice with a pinch of salt,I only speak from a personal preferance!
The second video achieved the same result with the same actions,but for me,looked a lot less dodgey because everything was seen head-on.
You have no need to stick in a knuckle busting move(maybe only me),i.e the clipshift,to make it seem better for a bunch of magicians.
Your work on this move is way way better than mine and is very nice to watch!!
Thanks for sharing!
Ray.

Looks great Ray. Thanks for working on the move. My Hats off to you.