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KC Cameron Inner circle Raleigh, North Carolina 1976 Posts |
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The Burnaby Kid Inner circle St. John's, Canada 3159 Posts |
There's a ton of color in there. How would it look with a white background (instead of the light blue)?
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ssucahyo Inner circle 1954 Posts |
This is good.
I believe that many colors are in purpose.... |
chleby New user 52 Posts |
I think it looks good...especially being marketed as a kids show you want something bright and poppy that will catch kids eyes.
Lighting Designer- Dan Sperry MAGIC SHOW Times Scare NYC
Lighting Designer- Dan Sperry Spring 2011 |
KC Cameron Inner circle Raleigh, North Carolina 1976 Posts |
Yes,
Multiple bright colors look are suppose to look fun and kid friendly. I use a lot of blue that represents stability, and yellow and red for excitement. |
The Burnaby Kid Inner circle St. John's, Canada 3159 Posts |
My concern is that it affects legibility and makes it overly busy. You've got dark blue writing with a light blue background, there's red, blue and yellow outlining on different coloured texts, and there's essentially a whole heck of a lot of different colours competing for attention on the page.
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BenjaminMan New user 94 Posts |
I think there is too much space between "Captain" and "Quakers". I just feel like if they were closer together my eyes could run over it more smoothly, and I feel like it is a bit distracting.
Mostly,though, it seems fine to me. |
KC Cameron Inner circle Raleigh, North Carolina 1976 Posts |
Andrew,
I will eliminate some of the text. that should make it less busy. Benjamin, You are right too. I'll have a new graphic up by tomorrow. |
ClintonMagus Inner circle Southwestern Southeast 3997 Posts |
Red text on a blue background (and vice-versa) makes one's eyes tired.
I love the illustration, though!
Things are more like they are today than they've ever been before...
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