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KC Cameron
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Thanks in advance!

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The Burnaby Kid
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There's a ton of color in there. How would it look with a white background (instead of the light blue)?
ssucahyo
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This is good.
I believe that many colors are in purpose....
chleby
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I think it looks good...especially being marketed as a kids show you want something bright and poppy that will catch kids eyes.
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KC Cameron
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Yes,
Multiple bright colors look are suppose to look fun and kid friendly. I use a lot of blue that represents stability, and yellow and red for excitement.
The Burnaby Kid
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My concern is that it affects legibility and makes it overly busy. You've got dark blue writing with a light blue background, there's red, blue and yellow outlining on different coloured texts, and there's essentially a whole heck of a lot of different colours competing for attention on the page.
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I think there is too much space between "Captain" and "Quakers". I just feel like if they were closer together my eyes could run over it more smoothly, and I feel like it is a bit distracting.

Mostly,though, it seems fine to me.
KC Cameron
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Andrew,

I will eliminate some of the text. that should make it less busy.

Benjamin,
You are right too.


I'll have a new graphic up by tomorrow.
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Red text on a blue background (and vice-versa) makes one's eyes tired.

I love the illustration, though!
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