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Dimitri Mystery Artist Veteran user Israel/Ukraine 355 Posts |
I have a new website and I would be glad to hear your comments,
don´t pay to much attention to the texts in English, my audience is Spanish speakers, the English text most likely contains many grammar mistakes. I am more concerned about the graphics and that the website is not blocked at your country. http://www.dimagician.com thanks! |
Bazinga Loyal user 277 Posts |
It's a pretty decent looking site to me. Clean and uncluttered, unobtrusive background, easy to navigate.
You could use having someone clean up some the English copy, but you already know that. I only saw a few places where the words should be changed. I think there might only be two things you might want to do. 1. Make better use of the page titles (a little more descriptive) and use alt-text for the images. You can make them descriptive too. 2. In the photo gallery, I only found the links to go to the next photo by accident. I saw nothing but a vertical black line under each photo my mouse moved over it by accident and the arrow changed to the pointing finger, telling me it was a link. Nice work Dimitri. Bazinga! |
Dimitri Mystery Artist Veteran user Israel/Ukraine 355 Posts |
Thank you Bazinga!
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Close.Up.Dave Inner circle Behind you! 2956 Posts |
The site looks very good.
My only criticism would be that the photos that are in the "slider" on the home page flash into white before moving into the next photo. To me, it was harsh on my eyes. To other people it may not be a big deal. But I found that for the short length of time the photos appeared, it would quickly flash into white and a new photo would appear, making it hard to absorb what was actually happening in the photo itself. Perhaps having the photo stay on for a another second, and sliding or fading into the next photo would be more visually pleasing overall. It's a small thing, but noticible for someone like me trying to look at the photos. The site is also not mobile friendly. This isn't a huge deal, but could be one day. |
gman Special user Lancaster, pa 751 Posts |
Dimitri, nice looking site however, I noticed it isn't a responsive site. How are you planning to accommodate the fine folks who are using their smart phones to check you out?
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eatonmagic Special user Orlando, FL 737 Posts |
How do you plan to use this? Are you using it to attract clients or just tell about who you are?
How are people finding you? How are you capturing leads from visitors once they are in your site? Who is your ideal client? |
Dimitri Mystery Artist Veteran user Israel/Ukraine 355 Posts |
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On 2013-11-01 01:57, eatonmagic wrote: 1.to attract audience and reffer people that call me to the site which should tell about the show better than me on the phone 2.people will be able to find it through google, facebook, business cards, etc or I will contact myself an agency or a potential clients to get them interested in the show 3.capturing leads by hoping they will like what they see, find all the necessary information and contact me 4. hmm, basically my ideal client is anyone who is looking to add fun, excitement and amazement for his event. |
Starrpower Inner circle 4070 Posts |
It took a long time to load for me.
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