Hey Guys,

I have been performing walk-around proffesionally for the past 2 years. I also busk quite a lot. Last night I got my chance to perform my first stage show for a corporate audience. Hope you guys enjoy a few clips. WOW, I had fun.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WWjNPXqvt2E

It was good. don't rush the 'personal preference' joke. It got lost in the laughs of just bringing out the roll.
I suggest waiting a beat. Then unrolling it so people can tell its 'backwards' then turning it and saying 'personal preference'.
I think you will get an extra laugh and the joke won't be a throw away anymore.

Think about a change of wardrobe if you're working restaurants, you look like a waiter

Very good, balls over head is one of my favourite routines. Well done.

Good Point, I will probably go witha suit next performance. Thank You

That was great. Iv'e never considered this routine for an adult show. WoW.
Interesting... needs to be a very laid back corporate event I think..

I thought it was great. I agree with the coaching on timing the "personal preference" line. I think you look perfect in your outfit. It sets you apart from the crowd as someone polished with something special to offer. You look like a pro and worth what you're paid. Don't dress down to the crowd. Expect them to come into your unique realm. It establishes your authority over the room.