Brutally honest criticism appreciated. I will not take it personally

https://youtu.be/GFkXJ2Aunag

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Ddamen,
The lighting is good. I could see the contrasting coins well. However, the image is blurred when your hands move and it was difficult to follow the routine. Maybe try a different camera? I bet it looks great in person.

I agree; hopefully it's more clear now: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BQT8sRaJ3Nw

Im waiting for one of my A/V friends to bring a real camera

I loved it. Very impressed. 😀

Much better! The first three productions were flawless. My only advise from a spectators perspective would be to slow the middle of the routine down a bit If possible. There is a lot going on in the middle of the routine. The false transfers could be a bit more convincing. The chink a chink at the end was really cool. Overall it was excellent!

Yeah I'm not happy with the transfers. I'm going to revisit the basics the next couple weeks.

Thanks for taking the time

The production at the beginning caught me off guard. In fact, I have no idea how you did it. I think it would be better if you took the middle part out entirely. That of course is just my opinion, and not a definite statement.

A lot of work has gone in. I can tell. As far as transfers go, try adding a little more space between the hands and feeling freer. They look cramped and methodical.

Yeah I def agree. much obliged for all the advice so far