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gordon russ New user 58 Posts |
I just started promoting a new birthday party web site. http://www.mybirthdayrocks.com/
If you have any constructive suggestions I will welcome them. The main purpose to the site is to pick up some nearby shows without much travel. I do have a lot more video endorsements to add. I just have to find some time to edit them. Thanks Gordon the Magician |
Cliffg37 Inner circle Long Beach, CA 2491 Posts |
I like your web site Gordon. I like it very much. There is one point I would make, and it is not such a big deal.
The line spacing on your bronze package looks to squeezed together. You probably did that to make it fit the sizing of the photo, but I noticed it, parents might too. Otherwise, I would book you myself if I had a young child and lived near you.
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Donald Dunphy Inner circle Victoria, BC, Canada 7563 Posts |
Hi Gordon -
I looks quite nice. Clean and simple. I found the "Staples" in the page template design to be distracting (made it hard to read some words). Also, on the home page, you have this sentence: "Pricing for in home parties within a 60 mile radius of Gordon the Magician World Headquarters." I would add your location at that point in the text by either saying "Metro Detroit" (I had to go to your "About" page to find that information), or say, "See map below" if you still want to be a bit vague. Make it easy for your customers to figure out if you're in their area, or a long ways away. Also, it's good to put your location purely for SEO reasons. I also think it might be a good idea to add a few testimonials in print (in addition to the videos). Sometimes at the workplace a parent can't watch a video, but can read the text on your site. I've had many parents who try to research / make their party arrangements while at work. - Donald
Donald Dunphy is a Victoria Magician, British Columbia, Canada.
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Howie Diddot Inner circle San Francisco & Los Angeles California 3288 Posts |
Gordon;
Overall the site looks great. but the only limit you have on giveaways are the T shirts. If every child at the party gets a balloon animal and there are 40 children at the party, you're not getting out in one hour and fifteen minutes with also performing a show; the same holds true with the other giveaways, like the magic wands, if they are the standard plastic wands, you may lose your shirt with the wands, the mini magic kits, the balloons and the time. |
wally Inner circle 1828 Posts |
I am looking for party games, age 4 to 7yrs, Any new ideas. Thanks.
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